There were many problems we encountered during filming such as the time of day, diegetic sound and the location. Horror films are normally set during night time as the characters are unable to see clearly what is surrounding them, creating a sense of mystery and fear, as well as for the audience. However, as we only had the day to film it we were unable to control what time of day to film as well as the location of the school toilets. This caused the sequence to look very bright and not very horror like because the audience are able to see what is occurring clearly. Other problems we encountered with the location was that it was a busy place to be and so people were coming in and out of the toilets which meant we had to halt the filming every now and then, making it to be a much longer process than needed. This could be improved by doing this after school hours so it is not as busy and we can do it at a much quicker pace.
Whilst filming we found that there were a lot of successful diegetic sounds that could be used within the sequence such as squeaky doors to build a tension and using the doors to create loud bangs so to make the audience jump and to build a frightening atmosphere. We added non diegetic sound to again build tension, with low rumbles, screams and laughter when using a pan shot to capture the stalker in the mirror. The fading out at the end is also successful as it suggests that it will all end in disaster as the audience are shown a black space, which is unclear for the viewers to know what is happening. Continuity shots are very important as it shows a clear order of the sequence so the audience are able to know exactly what is happening. We done this well at the beginning when the victim is shown in a tracking shot opening a door and then shown in a medium shot from inside the bathroom walking through the door. This would be even better if filming outside of college as we are able to control what time of day we could film in (night), the location, for example a house, as we could control the amount of people there as well as the lighting and mise-en-scene to create a more horror like scene.
When playing the bussing sequence to the other group they thought it was very well thought out and that it was around the middle of a band three. This was because we showed controlled use of the camera and editing to show meaning that was apparent to the viewer. However, they did give advice on what we should improve on, for example, they thought we should use more close up shots to show the fear on the victims face and shot-reverse-shots when the victim opens the door one by one to clearly show the audience what she is seeing.
I learnt that we need to show more close up shots so to let the audience know what the victim is feeling, making the audience masochistic viewers because they understand the victim is worried and so wants them to survive. I also learnt that we need to improve on the editing of unwanted diegetic sound. For instance, at the beginning of the bussing sequence during the establishing shot there is industrial noises which don’t match with our particular sequence. The industrial noise would match with a location of a warehouse but not for a school. However, this can easily be edited out on final cut to improve the relation between the establishing shot and the rest of the horror sequence.